Saturday, August 30, 2008

Mystery of Future Romance



From the response I've gotten to my poetry, maybe more writing is in the future for me. Thank you all very much for your compliments. No major comments from the starving artist today, just that I hope there really is someone like this out there for me. I told someone else to try this, and figured I ought to take my own advice.
hope someone enjoys it.
dan




Where are you?
Through all this pain
I hear you.
Your hair dances
like a melody on the breeze,
framing your face
with joyful noise.
Your eyes show your strength-
like a river wild running,
carving a path through
a world made of stone.
Your lips are something too
tempting to touch-
when I get there,
will I dare to?
Arms reaching,
pleading - never begging-
that one eyebrow raised
makes me wonder
if maybe I'll get tickled,
and the reassuring smile
reminds me I'll not know
until I'm caught in a fit of laughter
and then after, maybe you'll hold me
or maybe you'll run.
I imagine the light in your face-
long for your embrace,
all the while that sweet voice,
reminding me that
there is a choice-
that rewards come from fighting
and working
and praying;
where are you?
Though I can't see you
I hear you,
waiting for me there,
wanting me before you have known me,
the way I want you now;
saving all the kisses
you would have blown me,
as you sent me out to
take on the day
with all the love that I'd need
if you were already mine.
time stands between us
so I can only imagine us
in green fields with clean air
and countless hours without a care
because each carries the others' burdens-
and fills in the holes
that we've made on our own.


3 comments:

wcgillian said...

Oh you do write well. Something tells me that you need more outlets for your work. You put stuff like this out there to the universe and this girl you seek will find you! Put it in a bottle and send it to the sea. Don't forget a return address.

RJ

Michaela said...

Haha (sorry I'm just laughing at Randy's comment). Yup, you'd definately swoon some ladies with your poetry. Don't look at me, I'm taken *wink*.

Good job, man! Love your poem and I totally connected with it. It's beautiful and full of heart. Can't wait to see more!

Yours truly,
Michaela :D

hyuntaek said...

wow you are such a gifted writer; i love your poem; i wish i could express my thoughts like you; sometimes I write a poem in korean and it is nearly impossible to translate it to english and contain same sentiment and depth.